Millionaire Destroyed Priceless Lucian Freud Painting

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8-27-2008 @ 11:38AM

just me said...

This article is confusing because you have to folllow the punctuation exactly, it doesn't quite read like you want it to read. By starting with the story of Benefits Supervisor Sleeping, the reader focuses on that painting and at first I didn't make the jump to the destroyed painting and its owner. It is just clumsily written--sorry JPS, otherwise, you're great.

8-27-2008 @ 12:29PM

JPS said...

Thanks, I see your point. I tried to make it a clearer.

8-27-2008 @ 1:57PM

Ron said...

Agreed, I had to read & reread to follow the jist of the article..I just figured it was olde age on my part...but I guess not..

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